Friday, December 23, 2016

Nostalgia Comments

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Nostalgia, the cold, searing pain
that creeps down, rib by rib
ribbons of liquid frost sliding
downward to blanket the
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Seamus O' Brian
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Mihaela Pirjol 28 December 2016

As I was reading your poem, I had an instinctual feeling: how superbly this poem completes my senryu '' Hiraeth ''! I am delighted to see that my three verses, had inspired such a beautiful composition on the same theme - Nostalgia.

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Annette Aitken 26 December 2016

Love the picture that you paint with this one. Such strong images and depth of feelings...nice write Annette

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Seamus O Brian 27 December 2016

Thanks, Annette. I thought at first in trying to create sharp images, I may have overwritten it, but on second thought I recalled some memories that have that painful of an impact, so I left it. Be blessed, my friend. :) S

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Bill Cantrell 23 December 2016

Wow, the good times were not so good....very well done! It returns to the memories from which we have been evicted, this is awesome poetry! ! !

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

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