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le baiser, le signe d'unité et d'éternité, remercie du partageant 10

I have probably butchered it, but I like the sentiment and the flow of the language as you have written it. Our kiss forbidden A recovered passion A softness growing An exquisite Delight Our kiss stolen Immediate softness Deep emotions Amidst thoughts Flying away. Our crazy kiss The dizzy present In twirling manner, Intoxicating, dances. Our kiss languorous Of The first days Balm Softens like sap On the lips. Our kiss so hot Begins with the dawn Woman weaves and Man lounges Our kiss eternity Accepts with serenity Not without glamour This sign of love Our kisses are For always