Norton High Street: (Stockton On Tees) Comments

It's in syllabic verse...chopped up? God you are such a moron!

Thanks for the advice Mr Maestro...I'll completely ignore it of course as I do with all your comments.

I am at pains trying to see if this is poetry or a good description of a place in prose. I can`t make up my mind. One thing, play more attention to the making of the lines; they look a bit chopped up.