Northumberland Beach Comments

A well written poem that captures a moment and a mood. The poem deserves 10/10. The imagery of a grey sky, 'endless line of horizon clouds', 'dark, slaty waves' that 'come rolling in and out' have been drawn so beautifully that I too 'somehow like it that way'.

Not all days are blue and sunny, and there's nothing wrong with a few clouds. A Grade A grey day you might say.

the view from the beach, short but sweet, enjoyed the write.