Northern Cross (Inspired) Comments

Wow, what a tranquil scene you have created, this is so good keep more of this kind coming :)

Very nicely written with a gentle flow and pensive attitude. I like the ending and the way it reflects back to the beginning. The ocean is always fascinating. Great writing.

this my dear anouk is excellent poetry..........

Great use of rhyme...with the added bonus of loving imagery propels your vision direct to the reader with flare.....you continue to impress with each new creation...you're very talented my lovely......keep exploring 10