Thursday, January 1, 2004

North Country Comments

Rating: 3.1

North Country, filled with gesturing wood,
With trees that fence, like archers' volleys,
The flanks of hidden valleys
Where nothing's left to hide
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Kenneth Slessor
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Terry Craddock 08 November 2014

Loved especially the first two stanzas, but For what nobody cares; does not seem a good juxtaposition for the wonderful lines culminating on Or fingers blindly feeling. Any suggestions on alternatives?

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Kenneth Slessor

Kenneth Slessor

Orange, New South Wales
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