Normandy - Lost In Translation Comments

I once found myself writing in a tube station in London simply because I couldn't wait another second to record my thoughts. You have captured that need so gracefully and beautifully! A standout poem! ~Ray

you nailed it gonna give you that that feeling one gets when you have to get it down, now before you forget

Lori, Really enjoyed this poem. Think John has a point about 'racing words'. Nonetheless good work! Carolynn

Lori...I like the revision, but I think there is still a problem with 'racing words.' John

Lori...the last two stanzas are great-really. Maybe you could cut the first three, which are interesting, but not nearly as powerful. I would say 'races away...' Your finger touched the gold on this one....take care, John

Whoa! Excellent contemplative piece Lori.

Ah, you are not alone in this, Lori! Love this 'of the moment' poem. Esther : ]

Love this Lori. Know the moment and wonder just how many got away! Danny 10