Darkness, coolness,
Overcrowds our happy universe,
The moon looks amused,
The stars peek fondly on
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So sweet.. My condalences. Great write!
Your poems are just make sense, pretty good. well done! I do
Serious desire for embracing such a thought.... You made it light not to feel a teardropp roll down our lips
the eternity of thoughts dear has a marvellous charm that surrounds us.... Ms Noots is your integral identity apart with a difference and you may rightly rejoice at her being in your mind for ever.
nicely created a picture for a old friend...great tribute...i felt the colorful image...
While you still think of her and write about her, she is alive forever.
There is so much joie de vivre in this poem and you have so well celebrated the life of your best friend with every line of it.10.
nic dedicated poem..its smthings about ur old friend...agree? ? ? /
is it an elegy? or ode? I mean your friend Nootsy is is or was? anyhow rhythm correct, images are much colorful and at one time I felt that I m reading G.Rosette..., , sweetly turned words into pictures.... hazel I often see that your pen writes abt your old friends...,
Great dedication Hazel. Brilliant description of nature with feeling, feeling of the company of your best friend. and you have picture well in this poem. Enjoyed and felt it. everything's well about this poem. Well written
A lovely poem Hazel, familiar countryside and actions, happy christmas to you and yours.
These ingrained images, I send to you with love, To God's holy kingdom above. Excellent poetic expression. You know how to a paint a picture in words. Go on Hazel. Never look behind.
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. My favorite lines are.... Walking across the Heath, Talking in waves, Repeats, retreats, Walking with my best friend, A straight road, With no bad bends. These ingrained images, I send to you with love, To God's holy kingdom above. Thanks for sharing. 10