Saturday, December 15, 2012

Nootsy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness, coolness,
Overcrowds our happy universe,
The moon looks amused,
The stars peek fondly on
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 July 2018

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. My favorite lines are.... Walking across the Heath, Talking in waves, Repeats, retreats, Walking with my best friend, A straight road, With no bad bends. These ingrained images, I send to you with love, To God's holy kingdom above. Thanks for sharing. 10

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Akhtar Jawad 11 June 2015

A wonderful poem.....................10

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So sweet.. My condalences. Great write!

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Wulan Permata Puri 25 December 2012

Your poems are just make sense, pretty good. well done! I do

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Vikrant Jog 24 December 2012

Serious desire for embracing such a thought.... You made it light not to feel a teardropp roll down our lips

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the eternity of thoughts dear has a marvellous charm that surrounds us.... Ms Noots is your integral identity apart with a difference and you may rightly rejoice at her being in your mind for ever.

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Valerie Dohren 20 December 2012

Lovely tribute to your friend Hazel, well done.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 17 December 2012

nicely created a picture for a old friend...great tribute...i felt the colorful image...

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Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

While you still think of her and write about her, she is alive forever.

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Matt Mooney 17 December 2012

There is so much joie de vivre in this poem and you have so well celebrated the life of your best friend with every line of it.10.

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Vishal Sharma 16 December 2012

nic dedicated poem..its smthings about ur old friend...agree? ? ? /

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Xelam Kan™ 16 December 2012

is it an elegy? or ode? I mean your friend Nootsy is is or was? anyhow rhythm correct, images are much colorful and at one time I felt that I m reading G.Rosette..., , sweetly turned words into pictures.... hazel I often see that your pen writes abt your old friends...,

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Jahan Zeb 16 December 2012

Great dedication Hazel. Brilliant description of nature with feeling, feeling of the company of your best friend. and you have picture well in this poem. Enjoyed and felt it. everything's well about this poem. Well written

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Mark Dillon 16 December 2012

A lovely poem Hazel, familiar countryside and actions, happy christmas to you and yours.

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Sayeed Abubakar 16 December 2012

These ingrained images, I send to you with love, To God's holy kingdom above. Excellent poetic expression. You know how to a paint a picture in words. Go on Hazel. Never look behind.

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