Thursday, May 14, 2009

Noons High Tide Comments

Rating: 4.5

Under noons high tide the bodys of dead rot
and the birds that are left with out seed
Shrivel under the suns heat but what
did I think would happen, them left with out feed
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Eric Elliott
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Autumn Jones 17 August 2009

I like the rhyme and the story you are telling. It is a little too dark for my taste but still was interesting to read. Thanks. I give it a 9.

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