Tuesday, November 1, 2005

Noon Comments

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Vacant stare, noons a nighmare,
fours hours to prepare,
for the outside-
Mothers and there children pollute the street,
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Graham Jones 30 January 2006

Hi Vincent, not exactly a trip to the happy place is it? but as for the poem excellent. Regards Graham.

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Max Reif 01 November 2005

Vincent, you succeed in conveying the terrible atmosphere, and the trap aspect of living in it.

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