Saturday, July 5, 2008

Nonsensical Sensory Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ears listen for noise
Lungs gasp for breath
Eyes search for sight
Hands feel for touch
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Adam Holmes
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Viola Grey 05 July 2008

a true work of art...every line hits where it should...I loved this one.

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Delilah Miller 05 July 2008

Another lyrical, almost self-loathing masterpiece. Colette

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