On one dark cloudy rainy day
I was on bank of angry Blue Ocean
With tides rising high, winds blowing hard
Tides pulled me in, wind pushed me back
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this is a story within a story. everything was against you and you found the strength to sing and because of it you found the help you needed. THIS ONE IS REALLY GREAT. A TEN
you are so right.... the partying...grinds and the GTs are all ok....but indeed one is so alone and in that sense not alone very nice approach well written and good flow cheers
Not alone. Life has its share of ups and downs. But we are not alone. Well written.
very nice and poerful poem. the title is even more powerful. voted 10 surya
Then I realized, I was not alone on oceans bank In that dark, cloudy and rainy night Many are there watching and listening me My songs made them to swim in that angry blue water In turn it had severed me too swimmingly to breath If you remove the fear, loneliness and illusion from inside of your heart, you are no more alone. Its all matter of realization. Good poem, Kranthi.
a strong and great determination conquer fear.....a taste of tide turn each person to survive and live.... leaving the pain and suffering to a chance to capture the best in Him....a very beautiful poem....i admire....God bless....10+++