Friday, July 24, 2009

None Is Alone Comments

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On one dark cloudy rainy day
I was on bank of angry Blue Ocean
With tides rising high, winds blowing hard
Tides pulled me in, wind pushed me back
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Antonio Liao 28 July 2009

a strong and great determination conquer fear.....a taste of tide turn each person to survive and live.... leaving the pain and suffering to a chance to capture the best in Him....a very beautiful poem....i admire....God bless....10+++

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Louis Rams 26 July 2009

this is a story within a story. everything was against you and you found the strength to sing and because of it you found the help you needed. THIS ONE IS REALLY GREAT. A TEN

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Joseph Poewhit 25 July 2009

Very nice poem, different from the rhyme poems.

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Saadat Tahir 24 July 2009

you are so right.... the partying...grinds and the GTs are all ok....but indeed one is so alone and in that sense not alone very nice approach well written and good flow cheers

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 24 July 2009

All are alone................a good write.........

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Ted M 24 July 2009

Not alone. Life has its share of ups and downs. But we are not alone. Well written.

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Marieta Maglas 24 July 2009

extremely beautiful poem, well expressed..10++

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Surya . 24 July 2009

very nice and poerful poem. the title is even more powerful. voted 10 surya

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 July 2009

Then I realized, I was not alone on oceans bank In that dark, cloudy and rainy night Many are there watching and listening me My songs made them to swim in that angry blue water In turn it had severed me too swimmingly to breath If you remove the fear, loneliness and illusion from inside of your heart, you are no more alone. Its all matter of realization. Good poem, Kranthi.

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