Wednesday, November 25, 2015

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Falling rain drops
Bashes on ground splashing itself
Along with some silt and sand off ground
Makes rainbow bubbles floating about
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Valsa George 30 December 2015

........... and it is children who enjoy the rainbow bubbles the most which are seen around puddles! A fascinating phase of Nature when it rains is beautifully captured!

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Kelly Kurt 25 November 2015

I'm sure you meant puddles. A very evocative poem. Thanks, Jayatissa.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 25 November 2015

Oh yes, Kelly; How bad it is to make such omissions! Thanks very much for your correction.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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