Non-Bloody Battle Comments

great work..! ! you pointed the most simple thing which can break anyone's heart having deep love...and i loved it! »so close«

This is a beautiful poem! Anger, Greed and Ignorance. You point it out!

A battle written in blood without shedding blood.Hot, hot blood.

good style! Your targets are unquestionable.

good style! Your targets are unquestionable.

I like your poem. Keep looking for more targets, ric

A very clever write. And if followed to the tee, would produce victory in this, such Non-Bloody Battle.

I do enjoy little poems that are to the point in a twist of a metaphore! This is good!

the world needs to hear your wonderful thoughts