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Catch the sunken moon Catch the ocean-splutter Catch the hidden seeds Catch my lilted song “Catch! ” no nomad goes........ catch the sunken moon, wonderful imagery. words. expressions. thank you dear poet. tony

Enjoyed all I read! ! ! Thanks Bill OBier

Thank you, Michelle. I will read your poems.

This poem is like a puzzle. Your A - F form is rather whimsical, but the tone of the poem is serious, maybe even grave. Reworking the syntax and word-phrasing throughout also adds interest. Overall, I'm left with a sense of void, not in a sad way but in the Existential way. Yet, it offers *a song for every avenue.* Nice poem. Perhaps you'd enjoy my poems Divorcing Ego and An Attitude of Ending.

catching sunken moon, very fine..