Sunday, June 21, 2020

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The wind carried the thistle fluff far away
The wild geese cried: 'Adieu, adieu'
Even the feathers penned their farewells
on thewater surface
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Vera Dike
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Jazib Kamalvi 21 June 2020

Such a nice poem, Vera Dike. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Vera Dike 21 June 2020

Thank You all from inner core for the positive feedback. I really cherish it very much

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2020

A fabulous farewell poem! A short and sweet composition....10+++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 June 2020

In the flapping wings of geese Delineation of farewell....

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Richard Antwi 21 June 2020

" I am at home wherever I go" Imagery which is rightly used

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