Friday, November 27, 2015

Noise Of Your Memory Is Everywhere Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walk to and fro and around and up and down
Stay awake and dreaming my life away
Wades in water just to get away from dreams, yet
The sound of memory comes like waves and leaving me
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 November 2015

Giving vent to the passions and over crowding memoirs in a verse form is an extra ordinary ability bestowed by the almighty. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing,10 points.

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Shakil Ahmed 27 November 2015

you have painted your passions very well in the poem, thanks for sharing

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