Saturday, January 16, 2016

Noise Comments

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Let me leave this annoying crowd
to a pleasant loneliness,
what a hell! Sweats in the winter,
smells, some tolerable but some intolerable,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 22 January 2016

Too much of noise from a madding crowd is so repulsive, making us long to steal away to some lonely spot! We live in a world of pollution. The noise pollution caused by the speeding vehicles cannot be avoided. But we can at least be careful about controlling the sound we produce! Great write on a nagging issue!

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Kelly Kurt 16 January 2016

Our own fears and inadequacies when seen in others help to balance the scales

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Dimitrios Galanis 16 January 2016

What an evironment painted your beautiful verses.I do regret for having not noticed it, although I had passed by the scene!

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2016

Some noises are really irritating and some are loud enough to bear them, Nice poem, as ususal.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 January 2016

Let me leave this annoying crowd to a pleasant loneliness, ..sweats in winter defines the worries and life in in loneliness is of course pleasant. Very, very interesting poem shared on really. Nicely penned poem shared.10

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