Noetic Kiss Comments

Hi Mari - A beautiful poem from your beautiful Heart. A Neotic Kiss in our dreams is always perfect - it feels perfect - it tastes perfect and the emotional effect is perfect - it is so so much better than a mere physical kiss. 'Dreams are never really reproduced by delusions'. When we reach out to someone 'neotetically' it only takes one second of love (V 1) . V 3 We would begin to understand the difference between metaphysical love and love in 'real space and time'. V 5 & 6 The 'infinite blue amphora recreated from the lost peices of broken stars' is awesome 'Just you and me and our thrill'. V 8 This is so so experiential Mari and absolutely describes the infinite thrill of 'Dream Love'. Metaphorically Butterlfy wings - Cherry blossom petals - untoched sensations' admit it Mari - you have been there - 'Like a Neotic kiss in our sleep'. Thank you for sharing the object of your Dream Love must be a perfect Dream Lover. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

fantastic poem, thanks for sharing

ike a butterfly with trembling wings on the cherry blossom petals swirling in the breeze with their untouched sensations, within their untouched world.... Beautiful..

Yes nice wording fine poetic lines well crafted

aww that is so cute and adorablke like margaret said the diction was vividly wonderful keep up the great work

The diction is vividly wonderful in a way that shows innovation 10

this is a beautiful poem, your writing is truly beginning to grow on me.. 10

Congratulations for your imagery and innovative, creative writing........10

Glib touch-down in valley of love-utopia with exuberance and oozing euphoria. Ten. Ms. Nivedita. UK Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems. niv

this poem carries a romance sweetly transcendal flowing inside it...thanks Marieta...10

A theme treated both noetically and romantically, and with good imagery

Poetic Memories of this Kiss will stay with me a while I hope. Love can and does last I hope a lifetime, but that kiss I am afraid may only have a limited shelf life.Nice Poem, I like your style. Philip

on a different type of kiss..loved reading the poem...........

Hi dear Marieta. i love the way you write your poems. its intringuing and very logical. mature lines and it really expresses great thoughts and ideas. i just wish some dreams could become realities instead of vanities carried by the wings of dillision. great poem darling.

If you could love me even for one second you would understand how much would hurt this waiting You would understand why dreams would never be really reproduced by delusions …yes dear it is hundred percent correct why dreams may not turn true.. it is so lovely write and demands kudos from mefor the brillaint wriote....10 read mine all dreams not come true...mary to marry... love at first sight

just you and me and our thrill like a butterfly with trembling wings on a flower petal in the breeze with their untouched sensations, or like a noetic kiss in our sleep. wonderful imageries! all together an WOW! 10+

and we could swallow its infinite blue.. a hunger endless

The diction is vividly wonderful in a way that shows innovation.

I like the imagery of this poem and 'noetic kiss' is a wonderful expression. Congratulations for your imagery and innovative, creative writing.

Marieta, with this beautiful poem, your writing is truly beginning to grow on me..(smile)