Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Nocturnexiii, Night, Fleeting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now, with jaded wings the fading Sun
Sheaths his sword and sees his task well done
Seeking somnolence within the trees
He ends Day's reign while counting victories.
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Kate Wiley
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Sandra Fowler 24 April 2008

Wonderfful use of both metaphor and imagery.The magic and music of the night artfully captured. Write on, Kate. Always your friend, Sandra

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