Friday, January 17, 2014

Nocturne Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night falls, spreading its black canopy,
And right on cue, the moon appears,
Resurrecting unbridled ghosts
That salute me with taunts and jeers
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 04 February 2014

Have you the Celtic in you mavorneen. We know of the spirits who assemble for their nightly festivities. Can't wait for Hallowe'en. We will have some great crack.

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John Brown 21 January 2014

This gave me the shivers Lora. A good, well written poem my friend.

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Kanav Justa 18 January 2014

wonderful rhythm in this poem, , , , like the rhyming words too, , ,

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 January 2014

It's strangely so that the demons from the past arrive on our bedside as nocturnal guests and depart with the day. This poem is an absorbing observation of that phenomenon.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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