Sunday, March 18, 2007

Nocturnal Passage Comments

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Night beckons.
A compulsion to prowl nocturnally, deep in the forest
Silent footsteps stealing through the night as the world sleeps.
Creeping through the dense, dark and heavy canopy of great trees
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Corinne R
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Francesca Johnson 18 March 2007

I can almost see some big cat slinking through the blackness of the night, silently, looking for its prey. You've used all five senses here, Corinne, to describe the forest at night. I like it..... Love, Fran xx

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Goldy Locks 18 March 2007

love the tone, of this. keep on SusxGLx

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