Wednesday, August 31, 2005

Nocturnal Longings Comments

Rating: 4.0

It has become a pattern;
each night I sit here at my desk
writing,
delaying going to our
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Richard Quinby
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Phillip Whiteman 21 October 2005

i think if you use different metaphors(there are many ways to describe longing/desire) you will show potential....

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Sallie Howson 31 August 2005

very sweet without being sugary

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