Monday, October 22, 2012

Nobody Told Me Of These Nights (A Poem For Melanie) Comments

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Lights low, Moon glow
Nobody told me this the things that the nights show
Beauty in the dark helped me to know what those.....Guitar strings
Can start to spring, melodies became her part thing
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Stevens Cadet
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Kelvin Owusu 27 January 2013

theres such feeling in this piece, deep and meaningful poem great work

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Malaya Roses 01 November 2012

You wrote this poem with such deep feeling and what is going to happen in future could never been foretold by anyone. Fate is coming to us according to our choice. WELL DONE...! ! !

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Malaya Roses 01 November 2012

You wrote this poem with such deep feeling and what is going to happen in future could never been foretold by anyone. Fate is coming to us according to our choice. WELL DONE...! ! !

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Yes! Greatly written, there is just something about your pen brother, welldone! The_African_Son

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