Friday, April 17, 2009

Nobody's Perfect! ! Comments

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Nobody's perfect
No not me
I am not perfect
It's obvious to see
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Steven Iceberg
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Nangula Immanuel 20 May 2009

'I do have love And hope still strong I have my faults But I know where I belong' I love those lines! And i guess that's all you ever reallly need! Well put, beautiful! perhaps you could read one of mine titled' Here i am, this is me.'

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Ruth Walters 03 May 2009

Really good thoughts here. Liked this very much. You could tidy up the rhythm a bit but no worries. I haven't got a plasma TV either and guess what, I don't care! heheh Ruthy

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Kayleigh Tongue 20 April 2009

your poem 'nobody's perfect' is so true, i love it.You are very good at writing poems! !

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your right is perfect, and people try to put others down just cuz they have more then u thats wat i call a rude person i like this poem alot

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Eyan Desir 18 April 2009

yes you are right 10s I agree...good write

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Johannes Yeboah 17 April 2009

yeah, u are right.Nobody is perfect but we all strive towards perfection cos dats all we've got to offer the world.nice poem, Chris! !

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Paula Coyne 17 April 2009

Love the poem and you are so right. You do not need to be a size 0 or to have materialistic goods to be a fantastic wonderful person like you.

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