Monday, February 7, 2011

Nobody's Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nobody notices nobody cares
Look at the state of the clothes that he wears
His only home is the bench in the park
His one friend the bottle comforts him in the dark
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Stephen Holland
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Matthew Wilkinson Luck 11 November 2012

This is a poem many people should read, it would awaken their lost sense of humanity and shake them back to reality.

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Rekha Mandagere 27 July 2011

Friend, this is really an awakening poem! Man is considered as a crown of creation, why should he meet such a tragic end? It is an humble appeal for all sensitive humans to love humanity as humanity irrespective of what he is, where he is.Great theme and the flow of feelings is wonderful.Friend you must write more and more stuff like this to uproot indifferent feelings towards fellow beings. I give 10+++++ marks.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 February 2011

A very sad poem.you might be interested in 'Missing Person'. Have a good day!

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Wendy Thopliss 07 February 2011

Stephen this is a lovely and very heartwarming poem. Really enjoyed it.

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Ava X 07 February 2011

This is a very stirring poem. I feel his pain. So many look but do not see, thought provoking material.

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