Monday, October 10, 2011

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</>What would I say
On my last heartbeat?
With the last breath
Of my extinguished life
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Stefanie Fontker 10 October 2011

I find your whole expression of inner turmoil very interesting. You speak of the flaws of being an individual, and the positive morality of being one of the herd. This really reminds of capitalism versus socialism. Perhaps, as witnessed in reality, a solid middle is beneficial. In the end, I hope you find what you are looking for.

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Tyease Collins 10 October 2011

It's been a while since I've written a poem, and I've been trying and looking around to find that one poem that would give me my spark of motivation..and I think I just found it <3

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