Monday, March 23, 2009

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Rating: 4.0

Raven: Hate Sorrow Fear Dove: Love Hope Happiness

nobody to love
nobody to hold
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Kami Henson
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Jack Price 25 March 2009

The poem provides nice tender feelings. Very nice.

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Hazem Al Jaber 24 March 2009

so sweet words from a sweet lovely girl.. who asks about a love and a warm hug.. and asks about a cares from a close one to give her a love taht she seeks for.. so amazing dear sweet girl.. yours.. hazem al.. keep up...

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Daryl Young 24 March 2009

I like the flow, the wording. and the ending. It really kind of ties it up. Which is something that a lot of poems don't do. Very cool. Please feel free to read and comment on my works too. Thank you Rabbit

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