Raven: Hate Sorrow Fear Dove: Love Hope Happiness
nobody to love
nobody to hold
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so sweet words from a sweet lovely girl.. who asks about a love and a warm hug.. and asks about a cares from a close one to give her a love taht she seeks for.. so amazing dear sweet girl.. yours.. hazem al.. keep up...
I like the flow, the wording. and the ending. It really kind of ties it up. Which is something that a lot of poems don't do. Very cool. Please feel free to read and comment on my works too. Thank you Rabbit
The poem provides nice tender feelings. Very nice.