Friday, July 17, 2009

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Every air that I breathe
Was an every cold at my feet
Whenever I stand in the ground
I travel in space filled with sounds
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darlric john lotik
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Liyo Denorte 08 June 2010

among your poems, i find this as the most potential work that you got so far keep on brewing, x

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~ Jon London ~ 17 July 2009

Deep motion pours from this Darlric....well penned bro...keep up the great work 10..for expression....what I like to see in poem...is emotion...you have that...nicely done

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Reshma Ramesh 17 July 2009

poignant poem...........well penned

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