Noah's Arc Number Two Comments

true herbert true two people left, even money old nick lurks in one of them that is why i carry a club to football matches you never know Warm regards allan

Now I get it! The troll under the bridge the three billygoats gruff tromped over were really the devil...and the billygoat gruff got rid of him. Then Noah came along and the rest is history. This is so complicated it just has to be true. Raynette

a rare talent manifested here! humor and intelligence fused the funny lines one after the other spiced up with tidbits of the surreal keeping the mind off center for the next line to bubble up a smile in the reader a grand poem

I love it! i actually found it funny... like the rythm too.

that was a hopeful tale...i think. are all bald guys witches?

I think there's a bit of 'Edward Lear' here Herbert. It definitely has the feel and his type of way out unusual story telling. I loved the idea of the socks. Lovely flow, lovely words, knitted together nicely. Love Ernestine XXX