Thursday, February 1, 2018

Noah And His People Comments

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When grandfather Noah came out of the ark at mount Ararat
the whole world around him was still wet
and just there he wanted to build a house
but Ham and his people took the road to the plains
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Gert Strydom
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2018

Our forefather Noah entwined with the result of the Babel Tower building, how deepest are the imaginations here and how rmuch wealth you have in your poetic fantasy. As centuries go by, we can hardly see the difference in time, sheer poetical freedom. I prefer to stick to the Biblical hierarchy. You have shared an enjoyable poem, full of poetic fantasy, absolutely artful.

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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