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indeed beautiful want to say more but i am lost for words.....bravo ma'am

Delighting moon sparks under skies in attires of lilly whites calming our leaves and residue I love white in this lilly.....

A spectacular write. Each work carfully chosen to enhance the meaning and beauty of this poem. Perfect ending.

Assonance in every line makes the rhythm running. Alliteration is not generally found except the letter 'h' repeated in pairs of words in a few lines. Attractive words make the diction colourful. The last line puts an end to the eagerness of the readers to find the reasons for the beautiful descriptions given in the stanzas. Conscious work of high quality.

It sound fresh as the first ray from the sun hit the earth... and it still not the last ray that will ever written in the land....nice write Swetha_Soul

The choice of words z amazing. Seem to be doing considerable homework. S, u have everything required of a poet. And to give it a closer reading, will return later

nice poems from you, let me appreciate you for the consistency Ms.Swetha! ! !