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Wonderful rhythm as I read this one Andrew, and the flow was great. It all melted together so well. I really enjoyed it even though it was a sad one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

This poem matches my mood tonight Andrew, Tonight my wife and I went to view a University, to see whether or not my eldest would enjoy the idea behind that sort of life/education Trouble is, neither my wife nor my self-have any experience in that way of life So I find myself in unfamiliar territory, we are a very close family Andrew, so when my eldest said that she liked the idea of living away from home .it not only surprised me but it also cut like a knife, it suddenly hit home to me she already feels ready to go, and at such a young age Sorry to download this on you, guess I just had to let off a bit emotion here Thank you Andrew...this poem says so much, more Love duncan X

Very sad poem, but well written. Couldn't you find a ray of hope in that new dawn?