In the night I sit and stair among the stars I see you there
Without a word said to me I hear your voice- no empathy
Within the words never muttered uttered the words- 'your destiny'
In this thought I smile up to you
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Wow this is so powerful. Poetry at its finest. Great structure, imagery and heartfelt reading. Fantastic. I just wrote one similar theme if you want to check it out - 'The day that Grandad died'.