Saturday, March 28, 2009
No Where Comments
Rating: ★4.9
there is nowhere left to run
no where to hide
i can can only hide inside my mind
im am only safe there no where to go but to where i came from......hell
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Kevin Fisher
28 March 2009
many mistakes in this poem you gotta fix but I like it I rated it 9 out 10 it shows your inner demon haha your still not darker then me haha
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7/21/2025 11:33:19 AM # 1.0.0
Kayla, Your poems sound okay, but, they all are about the same thing. Show a variety of emotions, when you feel different things. After reading your poems I was bored because they are repetitive. I feel the same thing when I read each one, and I want to be astounded, excited to figure out what the next poem will be about. Use variety, use imagination. Fae ♥