Tuesday, March 18, 2014

No Where To Go Comments

Rating: 3.3

There are no roads, no where to go
i sit in silence, mind set on slow

No reason to move, there's nothing to do
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Darlene Walsh
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Jak Black 03 January 2016

I have visited your website Darlene, and think I understand the traumas you experienced as a child, to a degree. This poem, for a thirteen year old, is exceptional. I’m happy for you that you’ve found a lasting love, long may it continue.

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we got the same style rhyms and flows wow i like this poem: Shrouded in darkness, cloth rough and coarse pressure crushed heart, life never been worse just making a sense of words that give you the streagth

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John Brown 18 March 2014

Not a happy time at all. I hope things have improved?

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2014

no rainbow, nothing is left, I like it. Please read my poems and comment.

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Darlene Walsh

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