Monday, April 28, 2008

No We, Just Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

It must just be me
and the way that I look
or the vibe I give off
that keeps pushing you away.
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Katherine Rhodes
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Barbara Terry 28 April 2008

I know all about this poem, Katherine. I am in a relationship right now, that I have to leave, because my intended does not all of a sudden share my enthusiaisms about life and laughter. So there is no we anymore, just me. The title of this poem is so true to many women, because it doesn't care who we love, that love seems to fade into the shadows forever. Marvin Brato said this is sad but romantic, and it is anything but romantic. You have written this from your heart and soul. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Marvin Brato 28 April 2008

Sad but romantic read, high marks.

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Katherine Rhodes

Katherine Rhodes

Beaver Dam, WI
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