No Way!
the ripples in the water
come from the heavy rains,
the heavy rains are falling down
through a break in the clouds,
it's called cloudburst,
indoors it can be admired so wonderfully
all that flashed lights seem so beautiful,
outside it is unbearable,
the strong winds can throw you up to the clouds,
the 8 o'clock news then says
tomorrow it will rain less
and on Sunday it will be peaceful again,
now it's raining, it's thundering
and lightning bolts back and forth,
every sigh goes to the north
Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Many can relate to this scene.Heavy rains indeed can create ripples in the water and even in our life.Most of the time we consider it as a blessing unless it will lead to floods.
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The last line added richness to the poem by introducing a personal element. I enjoyed the pictures conjured up and that human touch at the end.
Although it is just a Momentum Poem, for me, it will last a lifetime, an art to be treasured. To my Poem List.
Beautifully written and magnificently depicted. I can hear the rythmn of the rain and thunder and see the flashing of lights. s
Many can relate to this scene so brilliantly depicted. Indeed, heavy rains can create water ripples and even many ripples that affect life itself. Most of the time we consider the same as blessings unless it lead to floods. s
Lovely, lovely poem. So spontaneously expressed . You can feel the thoughts of the great Poetess drawn right straight from what she observed undistilled by other any other things.