Monday, June 20, 2016

No War Can Kill Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

And no War can Kill me.
I am the marshes and the reed houses of the south
I am the migratory birds dancing in circles
Around the sun that embraces the marshes
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Istabraq Al Ahmadi
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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions.............. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Sallam Yassin 15 March 2019

No one or war can kill the beauty in your soul and your soil

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Mihaela Pirjol 13 November 2018

You have written a poem of a monumental standing! Such poems rarely come to us poets; but, they do come when our hearts are filled with emotions which can no longer be contained! This is that kind of poem! Bravo!

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Naila Rais 26 April 2018

Such a great write.... I love it... Inspirational poetry.....10 Naila

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 05 August 2016

This so great. You are the winner. I am sure no war would destroy such a great believer: someone with such great History. You Iraqi people you were and still are the pioneers of human civilization. This is great poem, Lady poetess. I did really enjoy it with special reference to the mentioning of those cultural symbols from Babel to recent day. Thank you for sharing thie poem.

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 11 August 2016

Thanks a lot Dr. Ahmed. i am really humbled by your kind and supportive comment. i'd like to inform you that i am a male. Thanks

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 July 2016

..and I like very much this one, too.. a poem so full of love for your Land.. Very very good. Here you have chosen not rhymed verses: this gives you a broader freedom in expressing your ideas & feelings, without the restraint that often comes from seeking a valid rhyme..

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No words, on my part, can match your generous comments and the greatness of your soul.

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Annette Aitken 23 June 2016

What can I say! ! ! this unfolds beautifully as you read each line. The visuals are so powerful in my mind I can see the picture you where painting with your words. Loved it this deserves a 10.....

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 11 August 2016

Thanks a lot Annette Aitken.

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Shabeeh Haider 22 June 2016

A powerful poem with a strong message

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Shabeeh Haider 22 June 2016

A very powerful poem with a beautiful message

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Motschi Von Richthofen 21 June 2016

Hi Istabraq, fantastic poem, embracing the beauty and longing to live, being curious and love life. KR Alexandra

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Thanks a lot for taking time to read and comment. Much appreciated.

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi

Istabraq Al Ahmadi

Iraq/ Al Anbar/ Ramadi
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