And no War can Kill me.
I am the marshes and the reed houses of the south
I am the migratory birds dancing in circles
Around the sun that embraces the marshes
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You have written a poem of a monumental standing! Such poems rarely come to us poets; but, they do come when our hearts are filled with emotions which can no longer be contained! This is that kind of poem! Bravo!
Such a great write.... I love it... Inspirational poetry.....10 Naila
This so great. You are the winner. I am sure no war would destroy such a great believer: someone with such great History. You Iraqi people you were and still are the pioneers of human civilization. This is great poem, Lady poetess. I did really enjoy it with special reference to the mentioning of those cultural symbols from Babel to recent day. Thank you for sharing thie poem.
Thanks a lot Dr. Ahmed. i am really humbled by your kind and supportive comment. i'd like to inform you that i am a male. Thanks
..and I like very much this one, too.. a poem so full of love for your Land.. Very very good. Here you have chosen not rhymed verses: this gives you a broader freedom in expressing your ideas & feelings, without the restraint that often comes from seeking a valid rhyme..
No words, on my part, can match your generous comments and the greatness of your soul.
What can I say! ! ! this unfolds beautifully as you read each line. The visuals are so powerful in my mind I can see the picture you where painting with your words. Loved it this deserves a 10.....
Hi Istabraq, fantastic poem, embracing the beauty and longing to live, being curious and love life. KR Alexandra
Thanks a lot for taking time to read and comment. Much appreciated.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions.............. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.