Sunday, June 28, 2015

No War Comments

Rating: 4.2

The war must stay outta here,
Peace must linger in here,
Why war, why not peace,
Why 'ways desmantle,
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Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe)
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Chinedu Dike 01 August 2015

Nicely penned piece of poetry with a call for universal brotherhood of man. An insightful poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks for commenting Chinedu Dike

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Allotey Abossey 29 July 2015

War is destructive and must not be encouraged. This also implies we gotta watch our relationship with one another and know how to move along. But whatever happens war is not an option. Good work friend

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Thanks for commenting Allotey Abossey

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Thanks you very much

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Akhtar Jawad 27 July 2015

A great message, I liked the poem.........................10

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Thanks you very much indeed

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Thank you very much indeed

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