Monday, September 19, 2016

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I found the mountaintop
and saw eternity

I swam from the riptide
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Barry Middleton
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Lorraine Colon 19 September 2016

A very touching poem. Whatever our accomplishments may be, they are worthless if love is not present to bear witness. A profound message, succinctly stated.

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Barry Middleton 19 September 2016

Thank you for reading and commenting. It happens to everyone at least once.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 September 2016

Beautiful n poignant. Love is the best part of life. No victory is worth having if we are defeated in love.

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Barry Middleton 19 September 2016

It can happen. And yes it is a tragic tale.

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