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assuming mine IN LAST LINE refers to the same person mentioned in the 3rd person throughout the poem, i find it very interesting you finally switched to 1st person. i like it after having my doubts for a few moments. to MyPoemList. but you DO GO from temporary in stanza 3, to will stay in stanza 4. it's ok, i GUESS, but i'd feel better if you'd added long enough after stay. i ALWAYS stay long enough in my marriages; ok, sometimes TOO LONG! ! BRI (:

Susette, such a well crafted write...........................