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The fallacy of pathos works for me because it lets me imagine another poet investing feelings in an object.

Excellent work. Love it!

Maybe the externalized brainscape you picture here is a poem, which makes your private feelings accessible to visits by others.

Love it. This poem gave me a picture of a reclusive soul reacting to an emotional connection; such a soul is sensitive to another person's emotional feelers.

Loved the humour, expressed so vividly and candidly. Enjoyed

(cont.) 'Be gentle on my mind' reminds me of ' 'Gentle on My Mind' is a song that was written and originally recorded by John Hartford',

Gee, Ruth, for some reason I don't seem to like this as much as I made in sound in April of this year. Did it wilt, or did my mind wilt?

Gee, Ruth, for some reason I don't seem to like this as much as I made in sound in April of this year. Did it wilt, or did my mind wilt? (cont.)

I'm bareheaded.

Ok. I'll take my shoes off and I wont tread on any thoughts. Excellent poem.

Oh, WAIT. I guess I'd better read it again BEFORE I say 'I love it again'. ;))))))))))))))))))))))) Ok, I reread it. : )

and another I'm loving.....yet AGAIN! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

TO MY FAVORITES. AND ' 'that' aint chopped liver '.bri : )

I'D GIVE THIS 10 STARS ....IF I COULD. ***** THIS IS GREAT, FROM START TO FINISH!