Tuesday, March 21, 2006

No Tracks In The Great Void Comments

Rating: 5.0

Larry Yeury waddled into the Teacher’s Center
unable to actually lift each foot from the floor
flopped into a chair
and launched into an immeasurable pumpernickel bagel.
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Charles Chaim Wax
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... ... 26 March 2006

simply a wonderful poem, again one of your best, with all the elements finely tuned. this for me feels about the right length for your teacher centre poems; i think you got everything into this poem that you have in poems of maybe twice the length that you've written before.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 21 March 2006

I want to thank you for 'destroying' my breakfast this morning...LOL! Something said to read Charles' poem AFTER I finished. UGH... a 'disgustingly' well written submission! Even though it has made me sick to my stomach. L

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