Saturday, December 20, 2008

No Tomorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surrounded by my fears, my anger and my sorrow,
The night drags along keeping clear of tomorrow,
The thoughts of death are nothing new,
The damage and hate that I long to hold on to.
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lindsey ashton
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Christine Kerr 02 February 2009

I love your writing, It's all in words that are easy reading and understandable, yet so deep. You have a lot to offer so don't be even thinking of 'No Tomorrows'

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Louis Rams 21 December 2008

with death all around there is a friend to be found as poets we see and hear lots of things and because of this our words we bring to touch the souls of so many others-and that is why we are sisters and brothers. both of these are great-but i love your cheery side the most. another ten

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 20 December 2008

I think A LOT of people can relate to this, me being one of them You put this in such an understandable way, that it's astonishing Love the word choice, excellent emotion... It waz well worth the read Scale 1-10...13!

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William Milam 20 December 2008

Sad And yet I can relate to it somehow

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SaMaNtHa MaRiE 20 December 2008

i luv this hun. I can def relate to the 'Only loneliness I can understand' part.

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Ron Ryan 20 December 2008

Hi Lindsey: You are a very talented writer. I enjoyed this poem and I hope I do hear from you tomorrow! Your new friend across the pond, Ron

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James Mclain 20 December 2008

Lindsey.....yes..it helps to talk...not like this...besides look at the bright side you will be leaving your poems with us...thank you..sooooo much..) it(s lovely..

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