Wednesday, August 20, 2008

No To Violence (The Peace Doves) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whan I wake up in the morning
I opened my eyes
I was amazed by the beauty of the pure sky
I saw the flock of doves fly
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Shahad Raad
COMMENTS
Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Shahad, your plea should be heard all over the world, children should not have to grow up with violence. A well written plea, I hope it is heard. Like you I hate violence. Regards Bob Blackwell

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 September 2008

I love that you wrote the explanation at the end. This poem can be nothing but a 10. Less would incline a foul purpose in my pesonal view. For such would have no heart. Blessed be the children! GW62

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Shalini Kts 22 August 2008

A BIG NOOOOOOO TO VIOLENCE.... nice poem

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 21 August 2008

What a sad thing: (Poor kids. That was the best poem I have ever read about Iraq. Write from the heart- ~The Little Blue Bird~

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Farouq Ali 20 August 2008

BEAUTIFUL its well expressed nd nicely done .. we are ALL wid u p.s i wrote a poem nd dedicated to u..its called A respond!

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Kris Smith 20 August 2008

All hearts are with the children, this is not the way of the future, we must live for the peace we deserve. My prayers are with you and all your people Chris 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 August 2008

a 10 has been clicked for this heart-felt expression. we are always with you.

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