Im stepping out of the dark and in to the light
so u can see wat u've done to me
u will see tears of blood and
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beautifully written...sounds like what just happened to me!
This poem is really sad but completely awesome. I like the way you portray your emotions.
nicely written.....sry u have felt these emotions at such a young age......your heart will bend....'i promise' Brian
Something most ppl go thru, the only difference is u wer able 2 articulately write it as a poem... Keep writing Jazmine ur work is realy gd.
I LOVE THIS POEM CAUSE SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAPPENED TO ME...
wow...... i don't know what to say