Saturday, June 16, 2007

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Im stepping out of the dark and in to the light
so u can see wat u've done to me

u will see tears of blood and
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Jazmine Staples
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Flame6203E . 03 September 2007

wow...... i don't know what to say

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beautifully written...sounds like what just happened to me!

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Kori Love 29 July 2007

This poem is really sad but completely awesome. I like the way you portray your emotions.

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Brian Mills 26 July 2007

nicely written.....sry u have felt these emotions at such a young age......your heart will bend....'i promise' Brian

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Something most ppl go thru, the only difference is u wer able 2 articulately write it as a poem... Keep writing Jazmine ur work is realy gd.

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Courtney Guillory 18 June 2007

I LOVE THIS POEM CAUSE SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAPPENED TO ME...

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Madly In Love 16 June 2007

Wonderful poem Jazmine its amazing

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Kinal Ho 16 June 2007

wow! ! i feel you bro. i'm going down the same drain.

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