Wednesday, February 20, 2013

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I desire everyone to be rude
Giving me no attention
Ignoring me
When time brings them close
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Jahan Zeb
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Alexander Coppedge 04 August 2013

Can't live with or without them I never measured I merely accept friend or foe Nice poem

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Karen Sinclair 15 May 2013

i understand this so well after loosing my beautiful sister i just wanted to move to an uninhabited island to live rather than deal with the sordid wretched pain of death and loss again...

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Vishal Sharma 04 April 2013

splendid.....great poem..so courage..wow..

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Poetheart Morgan 21 February 2013

no, no, no. Where is the love that lay inside the poet? ? ? ? ? If we are here has a great purpose. Neither you nor I nor anyone else can answer these questions or questioning. Only accept. and know that is solved. Where is my friend?

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 February 2013

the last few lines really shows the kind heart of this poet, who feels that he is neglected! 10

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Unwritten Soul 20 February 2013

You know, somehow it has a deep effect on me, i just speechless...and i cant say many words but to pretend that way wont solve the problem anyway, you will be surrounded by black clouds around your mind and thundering pressure on your emotion inside...you know people say people die but love stay..if you know this u will understand......._Soul

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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