No, They Are Not Stars Comments

Ah, Tsira, you write such lovely thoughts and ideas. Your poems are rich in images and warmth. Very nicely done.10

What a nice write, short but you say so much. It flows so easily.10+

life and the nostalgia it carries with it in the face of realities that awaits ahead...nice work Tsira...10

Truly admirable...first you and then your poem :)

beautifully you connect one to another...nice poem

beautiful line, ... such sadness... 'no they are not stars' they are the pieces of my heart!

i guess this is much better if you are going to have this as a collaborative poetry...others will continue to finish this creation..........nice poem...10+++

lovely because it looks unfinished

nice to read this self-conversation... attractive poetic lines

No this is not the sun But my anger blazing in the sky.............. wow good work..........

bright repetition glazed with the golden dreams

Stars are dreams, I like your world it's good to dream.. Andrew 10

thats life as a dream, beautifully written 10

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder is it not. Your poem beautifully and succinctly expresses this truth. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

It's quite complicated to determine your meaning here but it got somethin to do with lost love I reckon.An unfinished love.Great piece tsira.

your dreams shine in the mirror of the joyful tears of angels and as they land on the ground your dreams come true 10

Lovely, just lovely 10+ regards Tom

Lovely repetition and a simple verse. Glad your back! Rx