Friday, May 4, 2018

No The Other Side Comments

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''The other side''
reminds me of a young girl
immensely in love
her heart to be operated
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 May 2018

.....MY VIEWS ONLY KINDLYI know i coz I have been to the other side many times in my life But once I stayed a wee bit longer 5 minutes plus may be and on my return when I awoke I knew there is no other side have you ever seen a dead rat mommy Earth is the only side if you want to then believe me but that's only my vision please Forgive me if on the OTHER SIDE we do meet Jawad AKHTAR Janbh ji

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 May 2018

THIS IS AN EDIT VERSION BY AN AMERICAN FRIENDLY POET WE ALL HAVE our own views Have you not seen a DEAD RAT he too had LIFE AND FAMILY THIS POEM HAS BEEN REVISIONED BY KIND COURTESY AN AMERICAN POET HE SAYS ITS POIGNANT

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